Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Quantum of solace

Many nights have passed since,
Empty dreams frequenting often
Blurry vision vanishing slowly,
Time to wake up in reality.

Walking through the desert sands,
Shining sun glaring the eyes.
Not knowing where to go,
Only the trails of her foot remain.

Following the trails ain't easy,
Many a mile to walk ahead.
Unclear of the intentions behind,
Rode my way all along.

Weakening knees posing a threat,
Thirst for water creeping contagiously.
Unable to bear that thought in mind,
Headed to a nearby oasis.

Hurrying toward the elixir,
I stumbled and fell invariably.
Surprisingly spotting her near the oasis,
Made me walk every now and then.

Too tired to drink water from it,
She inclined her earthern pot downwards.
I looked upon to see her face,
She was a classic desert rose.

The fresh nectar fell onto my palms,
I was more than happy to drink.
It quenched the thirst of my life,
A sense of elation arised.

She continued to walk ahead,
But too fast for me.
I tried to keep up the pace,
Only to fall now and then.

It was too late to realise what i drank.
A pot full of poison was worth an oasis of water.
She fed me with atmost innocence,
I was too obliging to drink it.

The shining sun glaring the eyes,
Blurry vision vanishing slowly,
Tears gently flowing by the cheeks,
I lay there in Quantum of Solace.

8 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

hey chellam....simply superb

November 19, 2008 at 11:37:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hey got bored of telling good, excellent,nice....but still i dont find anyother words ..so itz simply superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb.........
rathna

November 20, 2008 at 11:07:00 AM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Φ said...

Under gleaming sienna Sun &
O'er the vast expanse of granule Earth
you found the spring of life
inside the moon goddess's Jar
As you drink, thirst eclipses
between you and the moon, insatiated
O'er the striking sea of Sands
Under gleaming sienna Sun!!

November 22, 2008 at 6:32:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

its a real blessing sai..i simply luv ur way of expressing..!! n as with everytime im running out of words..& i wonder not many cud b this much gud at writing smethng beautiful..!! sooooo touching..

-Shalu

November 25, 2008 at 12:11:00 AM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

besh besh romba nanna iruku.

again am asking, r u in love wid someone. u r writing good poems, which is the inspiration for ur alluring imagination

November 25, 2008 at 9:41:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger che sara sara said...

these words seem very real
truely from the heart

December 31, 2008 at 2:53:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Unknown said...

nice one..:d

January 7, 2009 at 7:30:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Kaushik said...

Fundax machi. You really have very good imagination, although you should may be use a more sophisticated language, I think you belong in the next level

January 20, 2009 at 5:42:00 AM GMT+5:30  

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