Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Revered

Hovering waves of the sea,
Glazing sun up the sky,
Sitting there waiting all day long,
Hoping for a chance to the pathway

Having a good day overall,
Wanting to end on a high note,
One reason not to feel good enough,
I needed a distraction.

Memories oozing out of my head,
Not each one of those palatable.
Feeling of shedding weight from the mind
Time to fly to the eternal world.

In my arm lies the angel,
Flying away to glory,
From this wretched world,
An alluring life awaiting us.

We walked everywhere we wanted,
Flew to every place we liked,
But the slip was so smoother,
I did not even realize the evanescence.

I searched for u in everyplace,
You made up for all the lies u said,
Not even giving me the chance to recover,
I went back to the old wreckage.

Those thoughts of sweet madness,
Still binding me to you,
Unable to bear them anymore,
I fell on my knees for one last time.

In the arms of stars u belong
Unwilling to descend down,
May u remain comfortable there,
Coz my love will always be revered.

4 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

wooooooooooooooahh.. as usual... really nice da.. death of a lover.. th last 2 paras were vry gud!! :)
keep it up!

September 20, 2008 at 9:55:00 AM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi this poem s tooooo gud:)))un imagination ku oru alave illa... its seriously superb..keep it up n continue t same:))rathna...

September 26, 2008 at 11:41:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Unknown said...

hi sri really superb ma..great poetic thoughts..have u ever publishe in artilc..like hindu.really nice ma

September 28, 2008 at 11:29:00 PM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Gr8 one Sai, your poems speaks for your thoughts and your character.....

you as a person reminds me of a famous Quote i.e.

" He Attains the truth who is devoid of conceit"

Keep It Up...!!!!!

October 18, 2008 at 11:24:00 AM GMT+5:30  

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