Entrapped
Born to two different couples on earth
On a different day and different year
Yet god defined our destiny
So is our souls sealed together.
Neither we were in the same place,
Nor did we know each other
Praying for that day to come soon
For we will be living in a cohesive cocoon.
Days went ahead drearily
Living a life of a vagabond
But when I found this dear angel
My life was strewn with rose petals all along
Your love is well within the rules.
It is an epitome of fragrance
By trying to demand too much,
May result in evanescence.
Holding our hands together,
We sat facing the sea.
Leaning on her shoulder and wickedly smiling,
She was the only thing I dreamt in my sleep.
Your not what I thought.
You may be what I want.
Being Completely lost in you,
It is strange but unfathomably true.
So near is my soul from you,
Yet so far by distance,
But every time I think of youI can feel your fragrance.
Human minds are like muddy water,
Disturbing it, loses transparency.
I can’t be blamed for being alike.
Coz these sweet thoughts of yours unsettle me.
I want to say one last thing about you,
But every time I wanted to,
Some word cropped up new,
That’s why I am still entrapped in you.
10 Comments:
Great da ... well done ... though i dont understand some words in it i can clearly understand wat ur trying to say .... " Jaladosham vandha Vicks Saapdanum " apdingradha nee ivlo perusa eludhirukey ... (jus kiddin) .... Great effort machi .... Keep it going .... UR TALENT IS REWARDED ALWAYS ... ALL THE BEST
hi ya.. always i enjoy reading ur poems n this is also one such...its very nice..keep up this talent:)u wil soon get tat person abt whom u mentioned in t poem
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---ratna
hiiii anna the poem was really good......... amazing...
-------sathya sampath
absolutely fantastic..probably the best one amongst all u have written til date.Keep up the brilliant work going
simply superb.. this is one of ur best ones.. :) .. God bless ya anna..
simply superb! I guess the best of all!! Wat makes it so beautiful is the choice of right words for the right instance! n specially ur 8 th parah was so touching! Kepp it up yar!
Ayayayayaaaayayo!! Ayyyoooo SHAmaaaa!! thaaanga mudila da saami (in gounder style) mothella Microsoft word la erukura dictionary ya delete pannaum ...rascalss!!
great authorz too use dictionariez or for dat matter EDITORZ.. so microsoft word dictionary iz not a gr8 deal... watz supposed to b seen nd appreciated iz hiz effort nd love for writing and also hiz creativity nd imagination...! namakku suttu pottalum adhulaam varadhu la..! u keep it up da... diz one iz real superb nd undoubtedly 'UR BEST'..
AANA ENAKU ORU DOUBT.. epdi LOVE pannama ipdi lam??? i smell a rat da...! watz hapnin lolz...
my fav linez---
Your love is well within the rules.
It is an epitome of fragrance
By trying to demand too much,
May result in evanescence.
Your not what I thought.
You may be what I want.
Th selection of th header iz also superb… I mean I neva imagined th poem wil b abt love wen I saw th heading! Dat waz a nice thot…! :)
superb work again da..! :) keep up th gr8 job... :)
This is my fav.. :)
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