Fields of Gold

Looking at the sky for a way
The clouds too were not interested,
Except that brightness of the sun teasing my eye.
The wind at its elegant best.
Looking at the calm sea,
Holding your warm hand,
We strolled on the shore.
So I took your hand,
And gazed awhile,
Those lovely lips stretching laterally,
It was the moment of my life.
The clouds gathered and the wind blew.
You rose to kiss my lips,
The warmth of that soft flesh
Made me forget the sorrows.
You are like the petals of the rose,
Soft, colourful and fragrant.
The subtle aroma of yours,
Faints even the strongest of bees.
I had kept my promises to you,
Not that I have not broken any,
You were easier to convince,
But it was easier thought than done.
Will you come again and accept me
Thoughts of you pounding me everyday,
Unable to let you know my feelings.
I lay in bed staring at the ceiling,
I have no regrets, my love
I don’t know what took u so long
But your beautiful picture is still afresh,
Just like the morning dew.
Though I can feel your absence,
The days with you were effervescent.
Whenever you were there for me
Moments with you, were like
Living in fields of gold.
5 Comments:
datz a vry gud one...as usual... enna da vara vara orey rommance jasthi aayte poguthu.. haaan..!! sari illa... hehehe.. it waz tooo gud dear.. itz a guy'z feelingz while he misses hiz lover.. beautiful da..!! :)
maapla, good da. how u r able to pen down poems. as abhi said, one romantic poet in our group good :)
hi ur poem s really very cute......itz a feeling expressed by a person in love:)....u have written it very nicely as if ur experiencing it;) ratna....
intelligent, imaginative, interesting, intellectual, romantic, subtle, soft, emotional...loved it. Kudos.
hey did u write 'em on ur own...???awesum...mind blowing...u've a very gr8 talent...u donno me;neither do i....but felt lyk appreciating such feel gud poems...u deserve it all!!!!!have a nice day.....!
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